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An offline payment of £65.00 will be due to join.

Membership status will be Pending until payment is collected.

Our members are having to use an external link to stripe to make a payment using another method other than just cards. such as paypal or bank direct debit. When they do this they will make the payment before returning to Join It to renew their membership via the 'offline payment' method but they are shown the text above when they do this. This makes it look like they still need to make the payment which will cause confusion. If it could be slightly more ambiguous then it would cover both payments before and after such as

Thank you for making an offline payment of £65

Membership status will be Pending until payment is confirmed.

Does that make sense?

Thanks